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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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For crits, I can only find two minor ones: The upper and lower halves of Batman's face seem slightly off-center to each other--if you draw one line down the (3/4 turn) center, from the back of the head to between the "ears", between the eyes, down the nose to the center of the mouth and chin, you'll see the features aren't all balanced relative to it, either in tilt or in distance from the center. (Let me know if this doesn't make any sense.)
And the line-shooting gadget in his hand seems quite bulky and non-Bat-themed for his usual. Is this canonical, or are you just giving him slightly more realistic gear than usual? Myself, I think I prefer his usual sleeker gear, which would fit better with this spandex look; more realistic gear is of course an artistic choice, but would probably go better with slightly bulkier armor, boots, etc.
Overall reaction: I wanna see the next page, dammit! WHAT HAPPENS NEXT, DOWN ON THE STREET? WHAT DOES BATMAN DO ABOUT IT?
So this is one hella good sequential.